Thursday, 8 September 2016

My colour poem

Colour Poem


WALT to use descriptive language to help create an image (picture) in our reader's head


Success Criteria
  • Use adjectives to describe the noun
  • Use adverbs to describe the verb (describe how the action is happening)
  • Use a range of verbs to explain what is happening
  • Use a range of nouns that help us identify with a colour


Yellow is the colour of…….


A Pakinsave bag floating majestically in space.
Minions chatting away in their own language awesomely.
A slippery banana sliding on the ground as fast as a jet.
A lemon amazingly making anyone that eats it pull faces.
A cute duckling Quacking in a high pitch tone trying to find its Mum.
A beautiful sunflower swishing and swaying in the wind.
A yellow lamborghini speeding through the streets.
Pacman chomping through ghosts in the arcade

This is my Colour poem as you can see I chose the colour yellow I don't really know why I chose yellow. I just wanted to do something different hope you enjoyed it. 




EXAMPLES


Black is the Colour of


  • A wicked witch zooming dangerously from castle to castle in search of potions
  • A lazy cat waiting patiently by the roaring fire for its night-time feed
  • A  majestic panther stalking its prey tactfully through the dense forest
  • A piece of licorice inviting me to sneak it from the brightly coloured box


Red is the colour of ……..


  • Slippery lipstick running down my face
  • A bright red Ferrari zooming fast in the race
  • Blood running down my foot, puddling on the ground
  • A rotten strawberry smelling like cheese
  • The sweet juicy raspberry dripping  from my mouth as I bite into it
  • A juicy watermelon inviting me to chomp on it
  • The courageous vampire biting into a man’s fresh skin squirting blood


2 comments:

  1. that is great I love the WOW words love it

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  2. Nice work Amos, I like all the descriptive words that you have used and I really like the one about the minions it is really creative. Keep up the great blog posts!

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